 All people have their own dream, but only a few of them could be granted. Many people give their time, money and effort to their dream, but couldn't get it because one factor is missing. People who were in poverty defiantly have harder time to receive the dream than rich people since they can't even keep up with their needs. “Walking with everyone else” is a dream that can’t be accomplished.
2 Comments
9/13/2013 06:20:02 am
You have a very sage point; I enjoy reading this paragraph. Try not to repeat yourself in a short paragraph or else some readers might find it a little boring. Overall, good job, I agree with your opinion.
Heidi Tate
9/13/2013 06:25:41 am
I think you need to explain more on the sacrifices that people make. Otherwise, very interesting paragraph with good points. Leave a Reply. | AuthorArchivesJanuary 2014 Categories |
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